Here at Tweetspeak, we love to celebrate poetry by pairing it with a holiday, like Take Your Poet to School Week, Take Your Poet to Work Day, and Poem on Your Pillow Day. So we are happy today, in the middle of National Poetry Month, to bring our three lines and seventeen syllables to International Haiku Day.
Haiku began in Japan. Among its masters are Matsuo Bashō, Kobayashi Issa, and Masaoka Shiki. As haiku has found a home in English, the rules of the form have changed to become more fluid.
About a year ago, I started writing a haiku a day. A friend tried it, and it seemed like a doable poetry dare. Knowing I’ll be writing a haiku about the day makes me pay attention to its unfolding and helps me synthesize the most memorable part.
When it comes to haiku, Amy Losak, a public relations professional in health care, finds writing haiku and senryu improves her writing, providing discipline and focus.
“I am not an expert. I’m a beginner, and I will always be a beginner,” she said. “The appeal for me is trying to catch and release a moment in our daily life that we might overlook. It’s the ability to slow down, take a breath, release the breath, pay attention to what’s going on around us, and find any kind of emotion in that and deeply express a moment with all the senses in three lines, not necessarily seventeen syllables.”
This month Penny Candy Books published a picture book titled H Is for Haiku: A Treasury from A to Z, written by Losak’s mother, Sydell Rosenberg, who passed away in 1996. The book is illustrated by Sawsan Chalabi. Rosenberg was a charter member of the Haiku Society of America, which celebrates its fiftieth anniversary this year. She also worked as a copy editor, a teacher, a short story writer, and a novelist (under a pen name).
“I can detect the poet she became,” Losak said.
The book is not only a picture book of haiku; it’s also an alphabet book. The poem for A starts with the word “adventures,” followed by B for “boy” and C for “car.” E begins with the word “even.” For the letter D, which starts with the word “drops,” Chalabi illustrates drops of rain “clanking.” Don’t you think clanking is a better choice than falling?
Rosenberg’s haiku have been used in schools in the Bronx and Queens, as well as in the New York City nonprofit Arts for All. Her haiku also appears in several anthologies.
Losak says she didn’t appreciate her mother’s interest in haiku until she began going through Rosenberg’s manuscripts, following her death.
“I realize now that my mother woke up every day greeting the day. Every day was not only a blessing but an anticipation of the small miracles of the world around us. I didn’t appreciate that at the time,” Losak said.
Now she is following in her mother’s footprints, slowing down and appreciating the small moments.
“I’d catch the bus to get into Manhattan, about a three-minute walk. I was rushing to the bus and past my neighbor’s house, and there in some kind of bush was this magnificent butterfly. It wasn’t a monarch,” Losak said. “The way it was just hovering around the bush, spiraling around, I had to write something about that. That was for me a haiku.”
Photo by Nathalie, Creative Commons license via Flickr. Post Megan Willome, author of The Joy of Poetry.
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Laura Lynn Brown says
It just takes one book
one morning, one wake, one look
to open a life
snow falls after tax day
grass, tulips, violets plot
green spring will win
L.L. Barkat says
after tax day, hopes
for a windfall morning
snow green violets
Sandra Heska King says
tax day on delay
too busy–can’t find papers
interest is mounting
Megan Willome says
Tax Day haiku–only at Tweetspeak Poetry!
Rick Maxson says
I am so guilty os not reading the instructions…:(
so many texting
woes on April seventeenth
tax texts are taxing
Megan Willome says
Haiku and an emoji! Thanks, Rick.
Rick Maxson says
I love the first one.
The tax one is so positive
Sandra Heska King says
alligator sprawls
snout slimed with pond scum–stillness
just a coverup.
Megan Willome says
Love that last line!
Maureen says
close your purse — no tax
on alligator hides till
spring mating’s over
Sandra Heska King says
Maureen for the win!
Maureen says
The theme of taxes and spring is too good and too fun to pass up. We have Laura to thank for starting it.
Bethany R. says
How fun. I just started tinkering with a haiku on Sunday. First time in ages that I’ve attempted one. 🙂 Enjoyed reading your poems in the comments, Laura, L.L., and Sandra. 🙂
Bethany says
And Maureen! 😉
Megan Willome says
Bethany, I think haiku is endlessly tinker-able. And because it’s short, it’s not too intimidating–you don’t feel like you’re revising forever and ever.
Bethany says
Yes, nice to have fewer words to edit. 😉
Shelly Faber says
I’ve been following https://www.tweetspeakpoetry.com/ for quite a while now. Whenever I ‘fall off the wagon’, there you are enticing me back. Thank you!
Tuesday Haiku
In the deep of sleep
Tuesday morning came to me
where did Monday go?
Shelly Faber says
P.S. This post is a very touching story.
Bethany says
So happy you keep coming back, Shelly! Thanks for sharing your haiku too. 🙂
Sandra Heska King says
What Bethany said. And where *did* Monday go?
Donna Falcone says
Who can resist these….
Emily in a cupcake
or haiku with heart?
Sandra Heska King says
Not me.
Megan Willome says
Haiku for Take Your Poet to School Week! Thank you, Donna.
Donna Falcone says
😉 Oh how I loved seeing Emily in a cupcake. That just tickled me!
Donna Falcone says
PS. So so nice to have you with us. 🙂
Megan Willome says
Always happy to have you here, Shelly! I’m experiencing a similar melding of days.
Mary Augusta Thomas says
Tax day grey sky
cold wind cold cash
sharp edges everywhere
Bethany says
Love the “sharp edges” phrase, Mary. 🙂
Sandra Heska King says
Me, too.
Megan Willome says
Mary, I love the double use of “cold” in line two. Thanks for haikuing with us!
Donna Falcone says
two fingers marching
onto my plate for french fries
(this is the mommy tax)
Sandra Heska King says
LOL!
Megan Willome says
Donna! You crack me up.
Sandra Heska King says
rocking chairs on grass
money flying out the door
caution: yellow taped
Megan Willome says
Dang, Sandy!
Rick Maxson says
the Spring rain is cold
crocus push against the snow
like wet clothes clinging
Bethany R. says
“wet clothes clinging”
I can see and feel it.
Rick Maxson says
lastly the flowers
for which you would not return
smelly vase water
Megan Willome says
That one packs a gut punch.
Rick Maxson says
Five fingers playing,
seven voices singing,
Haiku short one note
Rick Maxson says
Brush of morning grass
lifting in the easy air
in fog a gray crane
Prasanta says
I could picture this!
Rick Maxson says
Iris Petals
Winter’s robe is off,
Fall’s lingerie, Sweet Flower!
And I, breathless bee.
Michelle Ortega says
Daffodils shiver
as April
showers.
Megan Willome says
Michelle, this is visceral. Thank you.
Donna says
Whoa yes, I can feel that. Brrrr
Sandra Heska King says
planted the ball hoop
when it was spring for a day
snowman got rebound
Megan Willome says
You have summarized what spring has felt like in a good bit of the country.
Sandra Heska King says
well taxed to the max
contemplating taxes — late
too taxing — take nap.
Donna says
Fire ants lunching
She never felt their munching
Setting tiny fires.
Sandra Heska King says
Ouch!! Been there.
got into their space
unwelcomed at the Publix
still carries the scars.
Donna says
I thought of you as I itched and wrote lol!
And that cart kerfuffle? Me too!
Bethany Rohde says
I’m enjoying this collection of haiku, TSP community. Such a variety of images and moods. Here’s one to go with today’s new post on Tweetspeak Poetry:
Storybook Garden—
orange nasturtium blossoms
out of the straw
Donna says
Ooooo whatva pretty sight!
Katie says
I like your haiku Bethany and enjoyed the post.
Here are a couple I wrote by pulling together some of the text and comments:
mission to enrich
the minds and hearts of children
through art, nature, lit
***
Storybook Garden
hands-on children’s haven
crafts, snacks, story time
***
love of exploration
and literacy, through gardening
creating, story-ing
Megan Willome says
Katie, you made haiku from haiku! Your official haiku sticker will be in the mail shortly. 🙂
(I wish–if there were such a sticker, I would send it to you.)
Katie says
And if there were such a sticker, I would wear it;)
Thanks, Megan!
Suppose I should have sent these to the comments for The Children’s Storybook Garden post by Bethany.
SO many inspiring articles, etc. recently. Here are a couple of quotes I came across at other places on the net this week:
“Our bodies are our gardens, to which our wills are gardeners.” William Shakespeare, Othello
“Literature is a form of fondness-for-life. It is a love for life taking verbal form.” George Saunders, Festival of Faith & Writing
Love the adventure and learning of this TSP community:)
Bethany Rohde says
Katie, thank you reading my words and offering yours in return—how generous of you.
The Shakespeare quote is a rich one. I’m going to mull that over today. Thank you!
Megan Willome says
I like that George Saunders one.
Donna says
Syllables falling
Obediently ordered
Fivish, sev’nish, five
ish.
😉
Sandra Heska King says
Love
ish
Donna Falcone says
😉 lold
Donna Falcone says
:O LOL!
Donna Falcone says
poems wake like seeds
hulls crack and spread making way
words stretch – find the sun
Bethany says
I like this, Donna.
Laura Brown says
Check out this periodic table with a haiku for each element.
http://vis.sciencemag.org/chemhaiku/
Prasanta says
Love that! Thanks for sharing.
Donna Falcone says
Fun. I passed that to my husband who teaches chemistry. 🙂
Laurie says
This will be great for integrating poetry into eighth grade science class. Love it! Thank you for sharing. 🙂
Donna Falcone says
Ooooo now that might bring some interesting reactions 😉
Let us know how it goes!
Laurie says
“interesting reactions” love the pun! 😀
Donna Falcone says
😉 tee hee
Karyn says
Tax day here and gone
Dependable annuals
Awaken; spring sings.
Megan Willome says
Thanks for haikuing with us, Karyn! I like “annuals / Awaken.”
Katie says
jackets come back out
heads bend to wind and chill
Spring has slipped away
Donna says
Brrrrrrr!
It’ll be back!
Prasanta says
Choked, stifled tendrils
Ears strain toward greening silence
April snow showers
We are getting yet another round of snow today! Hence, the above haiku. Spring WILL come. 🙂
Donna Falcone says
OH OH! More snow?
Spring always comes, Prasanta! I hope it comes to you soon!
Prasanta says
Yes, can you believe it, another round? What a spring, eh? Spring will be that much more appreciated and beautiful.
Megan Willome says
Prasanta, you have put sound to spring–thank you!
Katie says
bloom, umbrella tree
petal soft, reaching over
sheltering our prayers
***
prayer walking the trail
sisters offer petitions
Lord, Your will prevail
Megan Willome says
That deserves an amen, Katie.
Katie says
Thank you, Megan:)
And just this morning I came across the actual haiku I really had wanted to share from our prayer walk:
sweet umbrella tree
reaching over with beauty
blessing for our walk
Donna says
Sweet umbrella tree…. I love this image. It takes me to Longwood Gardens!
Katie says
Thank you, Donna:)
We’ve been to Longwood Gardens a few times and hope to return there – can’t get enough of the beauty!
Laurie says
Spring’s varied array
tax, alligators, open-
mouth flowers, cold devoured
Since I wasn’t sure if I wanted to put a comma or a hyphen between tax and alligators, I wrote this one too.
Tax-alligators
governments’ take, greater end
mine’s the lesser than
Megan Willome says
Laurie, so glad you’re here! Another haiku-er in these spaces, Sandra Heska King, lives in alligator country, so the two of you should discuss the intriguing idea of “tax alligators.”
Laurie Klein says
HA! Just found this online, Megan, Sandy, and Laurie:
“Tax exposure is like a baby alligator, as it grows so does the potential …” didierconsultants.com/2018/02/02/tax-exposure-is-like-a-baby-alligator/
Laurie Flanigan says
I don’t consider myself much of a haiku-er yet, Megan, but I am having fun. I’m especially enjoying the skill, variety, and humor of the ones shared in these comments.
Laurie Flanigan says
Thanks for sharing the link, Laurie. I guess I’m not the only one who thinks of taxes that way. 😀
Laurie Klein says
Delightful reading, Megan, and company! Sighs, chuckles, quiet nods of the head—there’s so much wealth and wit here.
Here’s my birdbrain offering.
Again, the rain. Gold-
finches bob like lanterns. Hope,
I am your bare branch.
A scold of magpies,
claws inscribing aspen bark:
jittery footnotes.
Teach us to live. Bowed,
there, beneath the sprinkler’s arc,
the feeding quail bathes.
Laurie Flanigan says
This is beautiful, Laurie.
Laurie Klein says
Thank you! I like the way you spell your name 🙂
And I admire your line break: “open / mouth flower, cold devoured.”
“Tax-alligators” makes me grin, and oh, the wry ending of haiku #2, all too true!
Laurie Flanigan says
Thank you, Laurie (and you’re right, that spelling is the best 🙂 ). My son used to call inequality symbols alligators that always had their mouths open to eat the bigger portion. It seems a fitting name for taxes too.
Laurie Klein says
Love that! 🙂
Megan Willome says
Laurie, thank you, and I love your haiku! Especially the magpie one.
Laurie Klein says
Thank you, Megan. Magpies fascinate me, so cheeky and acquisitive. So tailored.
Adam boustead says
would men be sexist
if we were like crokerdils
how do you want your eggs