Mount Angel Abbey, a Trappist monastery in the Benedictine tradition, stands on a windy hilltop in the Willamette Valley. The basement of the Abbey houses a natural history museum. The collection of North American flora and fauna includes an American bison: imposing. A musk ox: grumpy. Arctic wolves in three color shifts: black, brown, and snowy white. Tall cases hold insects pinned in order by size, boxes of bird nests and eggs, and rows of crystals and gemstones.
A chunk of quartz crystal caught my eye. Inside the quartz were ribbons of tourmaline, October’s birthstone. Tourmaline naturally occurs in many colors. The abbey specimen was three long green gems encased in another rock, precious stones hidden inside another stone.
Julia Cameron, author of The Artist’s Way, says that each of us possess a vein of gold, something that comes natural, a place where our native talent finds full expression. In your writing life, where do you mine your vein of gold? Do you have a rich sense of image or metaphor? Perhaps, you understand intuitively the power of line breaks and stanzas. Do you come to the work each day full of ideas, new paths to wander?
Try It
Write a poem that includes the lore of your birthstone. What is the hidden gem in your writing, the bright flash of tourmaline caught in common quartz? How can you mine these riches more fully and make your poem draft shine?
Featured Poem
Thanks to those who participated in last week’s poetry prompt. Here’s a poem we enjoyed from Maureen:
12 Months of Marriage by Birthstone*
A new red lipstick is no garnet
but planting your honeyed lips
on your Baby in January
is surely the next-best thing.
Come February, do forget
the time you were cold
-shouldered and celebrate
your sixth anniversary
with amethyst. It’s hard
and plenty durable,
like others’ marriages.
By March if you’re more
than ready to spring
for some peace — alone —
by the sea, let the water’s
serene aquamarine tones
cool your temper, maybe
reawaken your lost love.
Just don’t try sharpening
your tongue on her diamond.
You’ll be banished in April
and she’ll remember
what you did forever. Look
to a new beginning in May,
the way Cleopatra and Liz
always did, with an emerald
to signify your loyalty.
If you see teardrops falling
from the moon in June,
have the wisdom to string
her a strand of natural pearls.
Not passionate enough,
you say she says! Count to
thirty and on the first of July
dress her with rubies.
She’ll glow like coal-fed fire.
Chase away her August
night terrors with a lime
-green peridot ; she’ll
welcome her good fortune
and help you channel
all your higher powers
toward September, when
you’ll finally seal her divine
favor with a rare royal
blue sapphire. Read her
mood wrong in October,
though, and mistake
yourself not: you’ll see
that change of color
in her eyes sufficient
to match any flashy opal.
But know this also: things
could brighten up again
in November if you break
her spell of anger with topaz,
not to be confused with
the lemony citrine. And pay
heed: in December, nothing
will pale more than the heat
of your marriage bed if you
sleep through Christmas
morning, leaving her to find
no Tiffany blue box
of tanzanite, zircon, or turquoise
to ward off impending doom.
* Courtesy of American Gem Society’s facts, myths, and legends.
Photo by James St. John, Creative Commons, via Flickr. Post by Kortney Garrison.
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Bethany R. says
Maureen, what a clever poem. Enjoyed reading this treat today.
I was just talking to someone else about Cameron’s “vein of gold” concept. I’ve been trying to pinpoint what mine is. I have a couple of leads but will continue to think it over.
Thanks for this fun poetry prompt and post.
Kortney Garrison says
So glad you’re in conversation about your personal vein of gold, Bethany. Sometimes other people can very clearly pinpoint our strengths. Glad to have you reading along with us!
Sandra Heska King says
So true! Sometimes it takes another to dig through our mine to find our treasure. And then for us to believe it’s real. I have a grand daughter who just can’t see or accept the gifts she carries around within that just need polishing.
Maureen says
Thank you, Bethany. I’m pleased you enjoyed the poem.
Sandra Heska King says
Maureen… I think I’ve read this poem before. As Bethany says, very clever–as always.
Katie says
Peridot, gemstone
found on every continent
poor man’s emerald
***
effervescent gem
lesser known, pale green, birthstone
August’s peridot
Kortney Garrison says
The line, “found on every continent” is so rich. It conjures up so many images with so few words. Also really love the different iterations of the poem. I think haiku lends itself to that.
My response was a haiku as well…
Ruby slippers brought
Dorothy back home, but I
wear black birkenstocks.