Hopefully, you’ve tried your hand at writing the form poem called the Cinquain, created by American poet Adelaide Crapsey.
Since you now have a little Cinquain experience behind you through our previous prompts, why not experiment a little this time? To build on the traditional form, there are a few adaptations to add challenge to your repertoire.
This week we will try the Reverse Cinquain.
If you’d like to refresh your memory on writing the traditional Cinquain, please visit our original post here.
As the name suggests, this is still a traditional Cinquain with its structure reversed.
The first line has 2 syllables, the second has 8 syllables, the third line has six syllables, and the fourth has 4 syllables. Finally, the fifth and last line has 2 syllables.
Try It: A Reverse Cinquain Poem
So remember the order— 2,8,6,4,2 and start writing a Cinquain switcheroo! Consider writing your Cinquain about something that’s backwards, or moves in reverse— like backing the car into the garage after a long day at work. Remember, the Cinquain often tells a story so start thinking of clever ways to captivate with your poetry.
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Featured Poem
Thanks to everyone who participated in last week’s poetry prompt. Here is a poem from Shannon we enjoyed:
Awake
though dreams linger.
A letter from heaven
I couldn’t read; the writing looked
like hers.
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Maureen says
Fall’s Leaves
Weary,
they slip to ground, their once-green skins —
now worn mottled coats — shed
in autumn’s own
dust-up.
________________
This will be up tomorrow at Writing Without Paper.
Heather Eure says
Love it, Maureen.
Sharon A Gibbs says
Lovely.
Rick Maxson says
fireflies
departed, days shortened, copper
hot, and golden, autumn’s
bright descending
ending
Heather Eure says
Beautiful!
Sharon A Gibbs says
I love this. It creates warm visions of color.
Rick Maxson says
Semiprecious
once words
leave the silkiness of the mind,
they harden like amber
if not contained
in form
Heather Eure says
Rick’s got reverse cinquain street cred.
Katie says
pretty
tip top leaves wiggle and shimmer
drifting past on a breeze
smears of cotton
blue sky
AND
draft it
draft it again and again, then
yet again and again
and then again
revise
Heather Eure says
But in the again and again is poetic progress. We’re glad you’re drafting and revising along with us. 🙂
Katie says
Thank you, Heather.
I’m enjoying the community:)
Gratefully,
Katie
Rick Maxson says
Journey
journey
into all the territories:
next rooms, the distant streets,
the open mind—
return
Shannon Mayhew says
I love how this poem effectively uses few words to point to something so vast!
Heather Eure says
I like that we can journey into the vast poetry of your mind, Rick.
Sharon A Gibbs says
Rick, You’re a natural at this.
Rick Maxson says
Ban
What locks
without locks in the violent night,
the tug of war, the need
and longing to
escape
Rick Maxson says
oops, there is an unnecessary comma after “out”
please read without
Heather Eure says
Fixed it for ya. 🙂
Rick Maxson says
Thanks, Heather, but I see I was not clear when I said read without. It should read:
Ban
What locks
out locks in the violent night,
the tug of war, the need
and longing to
escape
Shannon Mayhew says
Ever since I learned about the “wind horse” printed on the TIbetan prayer flags, the mythology and the rituals around it, I’ve wanted to write a story with this guy as the protagonist. But for now, some poetry so I can get to know him better. 🙂
wind horse
woven wishes, silk strands of soul
blest is the beast whose task
is to carry
whispers
Rick Maxson says
Shannon, I love this reflection.
Shannon Mayhew says
Thank you, RIck. I’ve been enjoying your Cinquains — I especially loved the burl/carpenter one from last week’s prompt.
Bethany R. says
A gorgeous poem.
Shannon Mayhew says
Thank you, Bethany!
Heather Eure says
I’m so glad you chose to share him with us, Shannon. This is lovely.
Shannon Mayhew says
Drumbeat —
Fortune rides on a torn-flag stag
Juniper smoke infused
with streams of faith
Wind horse
Heather Eure says
I can almost smell the smoke, feel the wind.
Josh Duncan says
This one is called “Folk Art”
Folk art
When they’re eat up with eggshell walls
When light leaks in past blinds
When fragile eyes
Perceive
Josh Duncan says
Ah, I’d like to change that last word to “perceive.” Hate it when that happens.
Heather Eure says
I got your back, Josh. Thanks for sharing your poem. I can visualize the eggshell and dappled light. 🙂
Kaiya Rose says
Never
Ask a mirror, ‘who in the world
Am I?’ Trust my advice.
Don’t ask, for it
Will lie.
Liar.
I name her liar. But I can’t find
It in myself to be
Mad; I love her
Too much.
Kaiya Rose says
By the way, the two poems are separate. The “she” who lies from the second is not the mirror from the first.
Heather Eure says
Your poems are compelling, Kaiya Rose. Thanks for sharing them!
Laurie Flanigan says
These are wonderful!
Mine is a bit like an hourglass, a Cinquain coupled with a reverse Cinquain.
The Twist
I’ve watched
her twist her hair,
tighten it with ripples.
She‘s never let the ends show, yet
they slip.
I’d like
to say they glide, but glide would not
be right. The ripples slip
and twist her as
they grip.
Katie says
Really cool, Laurie!
Thank you for sharing:)
Laurie Flanigan says
Thank you, Katie.
Katie says
I came across a mention of “paper whites” in my reading this afternoon and was reminded of the pretty porcelain bowl of them our Aunt Nancy brought us once.
When we would visit her in the summer she would always serve us the coldest Schweppes Ginger Beer in the cutest little 6 oz. bottles:)
We were new to Baltimore at the time and had little kiddos. Even though her children were grown and she had no grands living close by she would pull out the old wooden train set for our boys to play with:)
So I tried both a cinquain and reverse cinquain in honor of her memory and hospitality:
laughter
cold ginger beer
paper whites bring a smile
wooden tracks and trains, boy oh boy
warm heart
AND
warm hugs
bright smiles, “you’re here,” “welcome, welcome”
train set pulled from closet
ginger beer fizz
tickles
Shannon says
I love these, Katie! I can feel that ginger beer fizz as much as the warmth of your Aunt Nancy’s hugs. You really transport us there — your words are themselves little wonders you’ve pulled out of your closet for our senses to play with!
Sharon A Gibbs says
Go Wild!
Beauty.
Words composed without boundaries,
thoughts spun without worry.
Let it all go—
Freedom.
Katie says
Sharon,
Enjoyed this! Thank you for sharing:)
& had a good chuckle over the 4th grade dare;)
Sharon A Gibbs says
A friend’s experience during fourth-grade recess.
Unpaid Bet
Plump worm
Squirming, dangling.
With bent arm, tilted head,
she claimed it did not touch her teeth.
Swallowed