Animate is a poetry prompt that focuses on speaking as if we are a particular object. This time, we’re speaking as a snowflake.
Prompt Guidelines and Options
1. Speak in the first person.
2. Be specific. Think nouns instead of adjectives.
3. Consider where you—the snowflake—are located, or where you came from, or where you are going. Or, speak as if you have a special desire or concern: maybe you are hungry, missing something, afraid of a sight or sound, in love with another snowflake that is like you or not like you. Be creative. Any type of situation is fair game.
4. Consider doing a little research about the object you will speak as: its history, associated words, music, art, sculpture, architecture, fashion, science, and so on. Look for unusual details, so you can speak convincingly and intriguingly about yourself.
That’s it! We look forward to hearing you speak poetically, from the viewpoint of an object— a snowflake.
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Featured Poem
From a recent poetry prompt, here’s a poem from Rick we enjoyed:
Blue Berry
How merely a cup of milk
and the morning’s last blue berry,
rising slick,
with wisps of white rolling
over its sides,
lost in a dark thrown bowl
made firm by fire,
for a moment holds us all in its form.
The world conspires to make more
of itself with its spark and sap.
—by Rick Maxson
Photo by Liz West, Creative Commons via Flickr.
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Donna Falcone says
Love your poem, Rick!
Great prompt, Heather! I can’t wait to see it snowing here in the comment boxes!
Bethany says
Yes, such a refreshing way to start the year.
Rick Maxson says
Thanks, Donna.
Wow what a great prompt response. Good one Heather!
LINDA REID says
I WROTE A PROMPT ON FACEBOOK FOR THE SNOWFLAKE POEM. HOW DO I
GET IT ON YOUR SITE?
L.L. Barkat says
Welcome, Linda.
Put it in a comment (the way you just commented 🙂 ).
Linda Reid says
Born this morning one of a kind
on a branch in the forest.
One among many-yet still unique.
In the still, frigid air
I float down, down, ever so gently
like a ballerina skating on ice.
Bethany says
Love the idea of the snowflake being “born this morning,” Linda. 🙂 Thanks so much for sharing this.
Linda Reid says
Thank you, Bethany.
Donna Falcone says
Linda! So many beautiful images here – I love that too, about the being born this morning. I was also enticed by the ballerina skating on ice. Such delicate imagery. Thank you for sharing!
Rick Maxson says
“I float down, down, ever so gently
like a ballerina skating on ice.”
Beautiful image for a snowflake, Linda.
And, yes, welcome to Tweetspeak.
Donna Falcone says
Hello Linda! Nice to see you here. I’m looking forward to seeing your poem. 🙂 Welcome to Tweetspeak Poetry Prompts! 🙂
Linda Reid says
Thanks.
Bethany says
Welcome to the Tweetspeak community, Linda! 🙂 How fun that you wrote a poem in reponse to today’s prompt. Looking forward to it! Let us know if you have any other questions.
Patricia McGoldrick says
For the Animate prompt, I was inspired to be a snowflake!
Surprise!
On New Year’s Eve
I landed in the city
Before I knew it
I started to tumble,
not feeling so pretty
I twirled with my peers
slowly at first
then faster and faster
on a downward course
So fun to be there
for this last snow roller of the year
so round and fluffy
landing there in the clear!
All of a sudden
someone opened the house door.
When she saw our path on the ground
she broke into a cheer
singing Auld Lang Syne and
happy new year!
2017 Patricia McGoldrick
Heather Eure says
Such a fun ending, Patricia. Thanks for ringing in the New Year with us, snowflake style!
Patricia McGoldrick says
Thanks, Heather!
Best in New Year!
Donna Falcone says
Happy New Year! What a fun poem!
I am loving all of these poems and seeing a lot of community among snowflakes – falling together I mean… very cool. 🙂 (heh heh no pun intended, but not bad 😉 ) Thank you for sharing your poem!
Patricia McGoldrick says
Thanks, Donna! This was fun to write from the snowflake’s perspective! 🙂
Noel Fagerhaugh says
heat within, outside
a cold too deep to rise from
swimming in drifts I find
only presence of mind
fringed and solid thoughts
dangling, lashing
freezing me to the many
caught in rivers made roads
through currents and eddies
I fall, sinking
children shout and stretch out arms
collecting their prize
my medallions of ice
Noel Fagerhaugh says
ps I call this one “Ode to a Flake”
Heather Eure says
My favorite line: “children shout and stretch out arms
collecting their prize”
Thanks so much for sharing your poem with us, Noel!
Noel Fagerhaugh says
I enjoyed the prompt, even if I failed to follow it precisely 😉
Donna Falcone says
I love the image of “rivers made roads” …. brrrr You poem really makes me feel the cold! Time for some tea! 🙂
Thank you for sharing!
Rick Maxson says
Perfect description, “medallions of ice”
Linda Reid says
Noel, I love the flow of words you used. Also great imagery.
Cathleen Perez says
All I’ve desired
lies a few feet away,
where my kindred rests,
painting the oak in a
crisp shade of ivory.
A gentle breeze guides me
toward my final destination,
as I join the others onto
my new, slender home,
resting my limbs,
blending in wintry life.
Donna Falcone says
Cathleen, this is so peaceful – I can imagine myself landing on the limb, too!
I really love this line:
painting the oak in a
crisp shade of ivory.
Thank you for sharing!
Cathleen Perez says
Thank you Donna, I enjoyed this prompt!
–Cathleen
Joanne says
I glide, with all the others,
Through this cold winter sky
Collectively,
We are snowfall
Or storm
Or sometimes, blizzard
Yet I remain my own
Six-sided, crystalline self
Even as I land,
One of many,
Whevever the wind takes me
Donna Falcone says
I love the feeling gliding… and of community and individuality that you convey here, Joanne! Thank you for sharing!
Monica Sharman says
Snow Crystal
“How full of the creative genius is the air in which these are generated! I should hardly admire more if real stars fell and lodged on my coat.” –Henry David Thoreau
It was the water.
I tumbled
through ever changing temperatures,
humidities, conditions in the clouds
but I know it was the water,
molecules bound
in a hexagon, a crystal,
a lattice freely lending me
its six-sided symmetry,
simplicity becoming complex
yet precise—I am growing into
one-of-a-kind, do you know why?
None of the others took the same
path. None of us were choreographed
into the same starry dance.
Maureen says
Good one, Monica!
Monica Sharman says
Thanks, Maureen! It’s almost a found poem, with many of the words taken from Caltech professor Ken Libbrecht’s site:
http://www.snowcrystals.com/science/science.html
Donna Falcone says
Monica, I love this… the poetry, and the science, and the starry dance. 😉
Rick Maxson says
“None of us were choreographed
into the same starry dance.”
Lovely, Monica.
Donna Falcone says
To the little blonde haired boy
with eyelashes longer than all of me,
and eyes bluer than the
whole of the sky waiting to peek
through the clouds above this flurry
thank you for tipping back your head
just when you did,
holding still as a stone
even though your hat fell off,
and letting me land
on the back of your tongue.
The lore of my ancestors
is very clear.
This is a high honor –
to transcend our
crystaline glory state,
wrapped inside
the warm smile
of a child.
Amy Smarz says
Floating, Fluttering
Gently towards the Ground
Airy as angel wings
Frozen Butterflies
Mother nature’s Christmas Gown
Cold with beauty
Airy Light
Fairy’s Paintbrush
Blankets White
Dancing down to Winter’s Delight
Donna Falcone says
Floating and fluttering!
I love this image of a happy, beautiful snowflake!
Amy Smarz says
Thank you
Maureen says
Snow and Ice
We speak,
you bracing
your words —
flakes of snow —
against my slivers
of ice.
Picture steles
deflecting
the sound
of loss
without
the wanting.
What breaks
apart
becomes two
floes stilled,
missing
their chance
to collide
below water.
Donna Falcone says
… missing their chance to collide below water. Wow this line is so … I don’t know how to describe it… I just love it!
Maureen says
Thanks, Donna. This is a somewhat “old” poem that I revised slightly, though that concluding line has always been there.
Rick Maxson says
I love these lines, Maureen:
“What breaks
apart
becomes two
floes stilled,
missing”
Mary Ann Evans says
Such a fun poem & just the right tempo to start a Happy New Year!
Babs McGrory says
i am December’s first snowflake
.
tonight, i wrap the moonlight
with grace and kisses
as i am December’s first snowflake…
the first Snowflake
to realize for the fist time
the gossip
as they say, “Hey, Snowflake…”
.
*Note: I wrote this as a found poetry piece which you can see via the link below, since I can’t post an image here. Thank you for the fun prompt & inspiration! 😀
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https://www.facebook.com/vowel.mouth.poet/photos/p.734605480029122/734605480029122/?type=3&theater
Donna Falcone says
I love this line:
i wrap the moonlight
with grace and kisses
And, Vowel Mouth Poetry is so cool – love your image. Is that your page? 🙂
Babs says
Yes, Vowel Mouth Poetry is my page 🙂
Elizabeth Marshall says
The Melting
Transformation from new born to melted flake, in a flash
I am frozen in fear
At the very thought
Inert upon the ice-covered earth Possibility stops me cold
As I gaze on mystery
In the vicegrip of my heart
I hold every time we fell
Steadfast
Slices of memory cling
Branch on branch
The tendrils of my heart
Too warm to stop
Our melting
If you go first
Return again
And land
New born ice-made glisten, dance
Rest please on my tear stained
Lips
Kiss of life and kiss of death
Donna Falcone says
Elizabeth, so great to see you here in the comment box!
I love your poem. This line really grabbed me :
Slices of memory cling
Branch on branch
Thanks so much for sharing your words with us! 😉
Elizabeth says
Donna, so much love in being right here. This prompt? Such wonderful fun. Thanks for your sweet feedback. Happy a new things.
Rick Maxson says
I like the cycle of this.
Prasanta says
Love the Blue Berry Poem. So many gems on this whole page of comments!
Snowflake
Shall I join the others who have gone before me
And pile on an unfamiliar roof?
Or will I end up as a snow man,
built by small folk with knitted mittens?
Perhaps I will join the frozen mass piled on your sidewalk
and stay near your front door all winter
until you shovel me aside.
If I land on the street, will I lose myself,
meld into obscurity?
Is my life tossed by an impersonal wind
or caught in your cradled hands?
Rick Maxson says
Wonderful final image, Prasanta.
Happy you like Blue Berry, thanks.
Donna Falcone says
Oh I love this…. and especially love your question at the end. Thank you for sharing!
Katie says
Where, Oh Where?
As I tumble toward the ground
I wonder where I will
be found.
Will I be put in a hard-packed sphere –
part of a snowball fight this year?
Or be on this day
in a snowbank
along the highway?
Will I be blown by the wind
into a snow fence with my kin?
Or be part of the biggest this winter,
the largest snowfall
seen in many a year?
Will I be taken for a ride down hill
on a ziggy-zagging snowmobile?
Or be scooped up now
by a lumbering
snowplow?
Will I be worn for a second or two
on a little child’s cold snowsuit?
Or just be – pooh,
stepped on by
her daddy’s snowshoe?
Where ever I land, I’m sure it will have been
an interesting journey until the end.
L.L. Barkat says
This especially made me smile at the end (the part about the snowshoe). I love how your poetry writing is coming along!
Katie says
Thank you:)
I’m learning a lot – mostly, how much I don’t know yet!