‘That, of course, is the great secret of the successful fool – that he is no fool at all.’ —Isaac Asimov, Asimov’s Guide to Shakespeare: A Guide to Understanding and Enjoying the Works of Shakespeare
Try it
Write a poem from the perspective of the Fool. Can you think of any modern day absurdities that King Lear’s Fool might find worthy of commentary? Maybe the Selfie Stick or the everyday use of hashtags deserves a sarcastic jab (#ThouArtHackneyed). What ridiculous treasures within popular culture do you think would inspire a poetic monologue by the Shakespearean Fool? Share it with us!
Featured Poem
Thank you to everyone who participated in last week’s poetry prompt. Here is a ballad by Richard we enjoyed:
Fulgurite
I am the rough limbs risen from the fire
in sand, the drums of Fiji striking back
into your spot of light, the war and sire
that battered you and made for me the wrack
of lullabies spun from the whorls of shells
on those ruined shores, made for you the glass,
the sea of color that soothed you like a spell,
a gentler light to fall upon the Mass.
The kiln never cools, glow of scoria
fine, from which a story grows so slowly,
the parts in broken pieces, paper torn
and tossed away, true, but not yet holy.
This scouring of the years has polished me,
father of my father, setting us both free.
Photo by Daniel Zedda, Creative Commons, via Flickr.
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Bethany says
Richard, the poem is stunning.
I’m looking forward to reading responses to this fun prompt.
Heather Eure says
Hope you’ll join in, too! 🙂
Bethany says
Thank you, Heather. 🙂
Rick Maxson says
Thank you, Bethany. I also hope you will join in. Your poems are excellent!
Bethany says
Thank you for the invitiation and the generous comment, Richard.
Rick Maxson says
Thanks for featuring my poem Fulgurite. This week’s prompt is a good one and a real challenge. As pointed out fools are no fools at all!
Rick Maxson says
Poor Atlas
The world is slipping on his sweaty back,
so much dust all these years, and meteors,
the vibration from the cities and scores
of rockets blasting off. Of course, the lack
those objectivists have for help, who frack
away for every drop of oil, what’s more,
the continents keep shifting and the core
lets plates collide and makes the mountains quake.
There was a time he held up all the spheres,
the whole of heaven held without a strain,
when people walked, except for charioteers,
the tap of feet and horses caused no pain.
The most of what we do is wipe his tears
and take some weight off when we take a plane.
Heather Eure says
Aaaah, Rick!!!! This is great! So clever. Thanks for tackling the challenge. The king would be dazzled.
Rick Maxson says
Thank you for your generous praise, Heather.
L. L. Barkat says
Getting the sonnet bug now? 😉 Love, love, love. (Form poetry really does get us writing in new directions.)
Rick Maxson says
Thought I would try the Italian version. Form does steer us into the unknown. I’ve always liked John Crowe Ransom’s analogy that the forms are like fishing nets meant to catch a different group of words. Glad you liked it.
Prasanta says
This is awesome! I love the last two lines.. And the pantoum made me hungry for a hot dog. 🙂
Rick Maxson says
Thanks for reading and commenting, Prasanta.
Monica Sharman says
Many words from the following poem are taken from here:
http://time.com/3926875/ipad-use-classroom/
Solution to everything,
guaranteed end-all,
every classroom’s magic
talisman. Live teachers
are so passé. Who needs
those screechy chalkboard scrawlers?
Uber-up their education. Take the high-tech
cutting-edge shortcut.
Heather Eure says
I like how the article was woven into the poem. Keen observations, Monica. Your poem captures the absurdity with a hint of sadness.
Prasanta says
Clever commentary, Monica, right to the point in very few words.
Rick Maxson says
Monica, this is so clever and spot on. Love “Uber-up their education.”
Rick Maxson says
One more and then I’ll stop.
No Cell Phones
There is a certain peace here in the dark,
though hawkers put me off a little bit.
But worse is when the lovers start to kiss,
the theme from Rocky blares a call for you.
Though hawkers put me off a little bit,
I like the common fare of hot dog stands,
but then the theme from Rocky beckons you
and makes a noisy province of the park.
I like the common fare of hot dog stands,
but ringtones ruined all the classic streets
and made noisy provinces of the parks.
So I eat lunch in silence in my car.
It’s not just Rocky ruined all the streets,
but the grating of the greats cacophony
that’s so annoying in the peaceful dark
where nothing should disturb a lover’s kiss.
L. L. Barkat says
Why stop? We love to see people play 🙂
Love this poem too! (Am blocking, on the form. Is it a standard one?)
Rick Maxson says
It is a Pantoum, but in S4 I think I messed up on the pattern.
It could be corrected this way:
that’s forced me to retreat inside my car
with a Sabrett and Beethoven’s Ninth.
I used to dislike writing with forms, but the more I did it the more I saw their value.
Bethany says
The pantoum is my favorite form. Love the idea of ringtones ruining the moment. The Rocky theme is such a specific detail, that I feel it with you.
Heather Eure says
You’re quite right, Rick. No one ever created a romantic scene with a montage. 🙂
Prasanta says
The Guest
He tramples on my azaleas,
barges right in— no ringing
the bell or hearty knock–
plants himself right beside me
on the couch. Of course. The old
tusker won’t leave me alone,
ribbing, winking, and nodding my
direction all afternoon. When
guests leave, he arises, takes
long final sip of tea, gently sets
cup on table, marches out the
room— the indentation on
the couch– the only proof
of his appearance— that pesky
persistent pachyderm who is
now more friend than foe.
Rick Maxson says
Good one, Prasanta! We all have at least one of these elephants following us around.
Rick Maxson says
China Doll
You can read about it when you’re older,
see photos of the children on the stairs,
a day the world turned a little colder.
A doll from then, careful how you hold her,
she’s porcelain, survivor of two pairs;
You can read about it when you’re older.
Three others, broken pieces, left to smolder
in the clinker, but this one was so fair
and the ash there was a little colder.
I wrapped my scarf around her to fold her
in something soft, the guards not watching there.
You can read about it when you’re older.
She was your mother’s; like you I told her,
be gentle now and handle her with care,
from days the world turned a little colder.
By the Elbe in ruin near the polder,
there beauty testified as sirens blared.
You can read about it when you’re older,
the day the world turned a little colder.
Robbie Pruitt says
Foolhardily
I am the fool
Left with my folly,
Left with myself,
My only tool.
© July 4, 2015, Robbie Pruitt
Robbie Pruitt says
Foolish Failure
Clumsily
The fool’s folly
Fails at the fallacy
Of himself
© July 4, 2015, Robbie Pruitt