In the last 25 years or so, vision statements have grown to become a staple of organizational life. Companies, universities, hospitals, government agencies, even individuals – they all have their vision statements. They also routinely confuse them with mission statements.
A vision statement is, in its purest form, describes what an organization aspires to be. A mission statement is how the organization intends to achieve that vision. The shorthand version: what we want to be, and what we’re doing to get there.
You can read a vision statement, and know immediately that it was either produced by an individual, perhaps with a person or two helping, or by a committee or series of committees. An individually written one usually strives for one idea; the committee-written one (assisted by the Legal Department) tries to include everything top make sure nothing (and no department) is omitted.
When done well, both vision statements and mission statements can read like a fine, moving poem.
In my career, I’ve written two corporate vision statements. The first one was accidental. I wrote a speech for the CEO, and the conclusion contained a series of statements that reached for something far beyond the company’s current performance. It stuck, and almost overnight. The second one was also part of a speech, and it was intentionally designed to be a vision statement. A year later, a committee got involved and rewrote part of it; that company still uses it more than a decade later and you can identify what the speechwriter wrote and what the committee wrote.
Here are a few examples of vision statements; I did not write any of them. See which ones are truly inspirational.
Johnson & Johnson
Vision statement: Caring for the world, one person at a time.
Mission statement: We embrace research and science – bringing innovative ideas, products and services to advance the health and well-being of people. Employees of the Johnson & Johnson Family of Companies work with partners in health care to touch the lives of over a billion people every day, throughout the world. (J&J also has a credo of its four responsibilities to customers, employees, communities and stockholders.)
Nike
Vision statement (they call it their “Mission”): To Bring Inspiration and Innovation to Every Athlete in the World.
Vision statement (which is also a kind of mission statement): Google’s mission is to organize the world’s information and make it universally accessible and useful. (Google also has a “Ten Things We Know to Be True” which is a wonderful statement to read.)
Robert Mondavi Winery
Vision statement: Robert Mondavi Winery strives to create wines that stand in the company of the world’s finest.
State Farm Insurance
Vision statement (another “mission”): State Farm’s mission is to help people manage the risks of everyday life, recover from the unexpected, and realize their dreams.
The U.S. Department of Defense
Vision statement: The mission of the Department of Defense is to provide the military forces needed to deter war and to protect the security of our country.
Harvard University
Vision statement: Harvard University is devoted to excellence in teaching, learning, and research, and to developing leaders in many disciplines who make a difference globally.
St. Louis Public Schools
Vision statement: St. Louis Public Schools is the district of choice for families in the St. Louis region that provides a world-class education and is nationally recognized as a leader in student achievement and teacher quality.
Mission statement: We will provide a quality education for all students and enable them to realize their full intellectual potential.
As a group, the government units (DOD, St. Louis Public Schools) are the most committee-like. Harvard’s is rather flat. The winery’s needs some work. Google’s is very business-like, but it’s not bad. Johnson & Johnson’s is the simplest (always a good thing for vision statements). Nike’s is inspiring. I like State Farm’s the best, likely because the speechwriter in me likes the use of the triad.
I’ve likely read hundreds of vision statements over the years, and the best usually originate in the mind of one individual. An individual we might call an organizational poet.
Poetic exercise: How would you write one of those vision statements above? Could you write it poetically and yet still make it a statement for an organization’s vision?
Photography by Lexi Rose Studios. Creative Commons license via Flickr. Poetry at Work™ post by post by Glynn Young, author of Dancing Priest and the forthcoming novel A Light Shining..
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Martha Orlando says
Reading these vision statements here made me think how I might write one for my life. Hmm. Something to ponder. 🙂
I loved the simplicity of the Johnson&Johnson one myself.
Great post, Glynn!
Blessings!
Maureen Doallas says
I once had to put together for a national audience of HR professionals an entire volume of corporate mission statements. The aim was to show how the best ones are written. I had to read hundreds of the documents. The best do stand out.
Of those above, J&J’s begins with the global (certainly visionary) but then addresses it to the individual (achieving the possible). I think the statement works well.
Megan Willome says
The Organizational Poet–that should be your title, Glynn.
I really like reading these. A lot of my work has to be fact-based, but that doesn’t mean it can’t be a little inspirational on the side.
Marcus Goodyear says
This reminds me of Laity Renewal. Officially our vision is…
Creating opportunities for people to encounter God for the transformation of work, life, and our world.
Dan Roloff suggested we change it to this:
We create space to encounter Christ to transform lives.
I’m thinking I like Dan’s version better.