The story had held us, round the fire, sufficiently breathless, but except the obvious remark that it was gruesome, as, on Christmas eve in an old house, a strange tale should essentially be…
– Henry James, The Turn of the Screw
A tradition fallen out of fashion, I find it a shame we’re not often telling ghost stories at Christmas time. Popular 19th century author, Henry James’s novelette, The Turn of the Screw opens on a group gathered the night before Christmas. They banter and attempt to top one another’s tales of spirits and spine-tinglers, eventually delving, as a story within a story, into one of the most chilling ghost stories I’ve ever read.
I find it a shame, as I’ve said, because we have no lack of good stories to tell, as you can tell from the flurry of poems this week in Random Acts of Poetry. From Madame Rubies’s unsettling, Dickensian chains jingling against an ankle bone to Maureen’s mysterious muffled mantled figure we are still quite adept at telling a decent ghost story. Make sure to read through the list below to catch glimpses of a wide variety of lingering spirits.
Why I love them so much, I’ll never know. I find them romantic. So close to the solstice, the days are so dark and gloomy anyway; there’s no reason not to add a little eeriness. So, thanks to all who participated in my challenge. It was from a similar (although summertime) challenge we get such classics as Mary Shelley’s Frankenstein, John Polidori’s The Vampyre, and Lord Byron’s apocalyptic poem “Darkness,” alongside which I would—if it were up to me—include Jen’s Annunciation, a poem to leave you, as Henry James might say, “sufficiently breathless.”
Annunciation
At daybreak I hear a footfall
In the cold grass,
I feel an immanence, the threat
Of an eclipse, a veil
Over the sky
I step into my living room
Where my small faux tree
Last glittered
With its tiny white lights,
Its heralding angel
Against the gladdened
White walls
Of my own home
There, on Colorado’s pale blue
Morning
An eight-foot Alpine Fir
It has taken hours to trim
There are packages everywhere.
A shining gold bicycle.
A vintage Star of Bethlehem quilt
Folded, tied with a red satin ribbon
Instantly, I reach for my clothing,
My keys, to escape
With the dog to the river,
To let the cold air wake me,
Searing my lungs
But the door
Has swollen shut
And then I see my guest:
She sits with her back to me
In the wicker rocker,
Reading,
From the immense
1870 family bible.
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I know this intruder;
I once slipped from her
Turning and eager
Like a dolphin
Lay in her arms
Reaching for her voice
Once she sat with me in the car
driving out to the half-empty
house on the market
Where I demanded
She sort the picture frames
Tumbling
From the walk-in closet
Later, I said to her
on the telephone
to the nursing home
“No more chocolates
The next day she collapsed
In the beauty parlor
After the funeral
At the garage sale
I sold the Limoges china,
The bird’s eye maple desk,
That which she would have
Passed to me
For thirty pieces of silver.
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We sip eggnog laced
with brandy
In a snowman cup;
A pine knot crackles
In the fireplace.
We muse over the packages
Hanging a chipped
Gilded angel ,
a hand-made miniature
rocking horse
on the lowest, barest branches
I surrender
to her steady, green-eyed
gaze: I anoint
her bruised feet,
I brush her dark hair.
All RAP Participants
Madame Rubies’s Christmas Ghost
Mama Abby’s Peace Shamed the Ghost
Laura’s A Conversation with Myself About Ghosts
Louise’s Red Rubber Balls & Other Hauntings
LL’s The Promise, The Ghost of Christmas Present, & Spectre
Sara’s The Christmas Ghost
Jen’s Annunciation
Fred’s An Open Letter to the Stoic and Epicurean in Me
Phoenix-Karenee’s Christmas Present
Scott’s I’ll Get By
HisFireFly’s Memories of Redemption
Maureen’s Barchester’s Ghosts
Glynn’s The Unplanned Christmas Visitor
Nance’s poem
S. Etole’s Upon a Night
Monica’s Christmas Ghost
Sandra’s If I’m Still Enough
Gospelwriter’s ghost of Christmas past
Susanne’s Noel Ghost
Emily’s Laughter
my own Dark House
Finally, it was my pleasure to host RAP this week. Be sure to check out Dave Writes Right later today to find out who won a copy of Contingency Plans.
- Taboo: Writing the Trees - June 8, 2012
- I See You in There: the Villanelle - December 2, 2011
- My Sestina is a Space Six-Shooter - July 15, 2011
Maureen Doallas says
I’m thrilled that you featured my friend Jenne’s poem. She is one of the most lyrical and beautiful poets I know.
Thank you also for the shout-out re “Barchester’s Ghosts”. It was fun to take up your dare.
M
L. L. Barkat says
I remember reading this one. So much to like in it. Here’s another part I like, that I didn’t already mention to Jenne…
“There, on Colorado’s pale blue
Morning
An eight-foot Alpine Fir”
thanks for the challenge too. It turned out to be great fun! 🙂
Megan Willome says
Jen’s poem is the best thing I’ve read so far this season. I am not in the “proper” mood. I’m actually enjoying the Rudolph and the Frosty and the Santa more than the Christ child this year. Such is life with the ghost who is my mom, staring at me from almost every ornament that adorns my tree.
jenne andrews says
Thank you for featuring my poem, Annunciation– I’m sure this wasn’t quite what the wonderful writers involved in the challenge might have had in mind but I can speak to this particular haunting, and so, I took the plunge! I am honored and wish all of you a wondrous and fulfilling holiday season! Jenne’ Andrews
nance marie says
thanks for hosting, mr.wheeler
a job well done.
Amy Sullivan says
Thank you! Each of you for a new way to look at Christmas stories…loved this and got me thinking of my own.